River Music

February 26, 2010

In a post earlier this week, I included Charlotte Zolotow’s poem “River Winding,” the title poem from her 1970 children’s collection. I enjoyed reading her poems these past few days, so for Poetry Friday, I thought I’d post another from the collection:

NO ONE WOULD BELIEVE

No one would believe
unless they saw too
as the train passed him
(but it’s true)
facing the river
alone in the wind
an old old man
playing violin.

—From River Winding, by Charlotte Zolotow, originally published in 1970 by Abelard-Schuman; 2nd edition, the one I’m reading, published in 1978, by Crowell; illustrations by Kazue Mizumura)

My thoughts immediately went to those moments on trains when you catch glimpses from the window, snapshots, as the train zips past. Joy, sadness, loneliness—you fill in the picture based on a fleeting impression of what you see. Was what you witnessed actually there? What a great image offered by the poem, an old man playing the violin before the river. Personification (a wizened tree), or something odd and wonderful, a man at the river playing the violin? Playing to the river, a celebration of life? Or mourning its passing? What’s your impression?

This week’s poetry roundup is over at Check It Out. So do.

To find out more about Charlotte Zolotow and her work, please visit her site.


11 Responses to “River Music”

  1. Laura Evans Says:

    I got the impression that the train is moving faster in life (just as young people move faster than the elderly).

    The old, old man had come to a point in his life where standing can be a chore, but he continues to play (violin) in life. So he continues to contribute to life with his music.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Laura Evans

    • Martha Calderaro Says:

      I get that from the sounds of the poem, too. There’s a lift in that final line, “playing violin,” in contrast to “old, old” and “alone.”

      Thanks, Laura.


  2. [...] Martha C.  has Charlotte Zolotow’s “No One Would Believe.” [...]

  3. Sheri Doyle Says:

    Hi Martha!
    I love that title and the first line. Thanks for sharing this “snapshot.” I will look for River Winding.


  4. This poem makes me long for a train ride!

  5. Martha Calderaro Says:

    I am so in the mood to travel, too! Thanks!

  6. Sherry Says:

    I thought since you enjoy poetry that I’d invite you to contribute your list of favorite poems to my survey. Read more about it here: http://www.semicolonblog.com/?p=9520

    • Martha Calderaro Says:

      Thanks for sharing word of your “favorite poems” survey. You have me thinking about them!

  7. laurasalas Says:

    I love enigmatic poems like this, that are so simple in their imagery, but can be interpreted different ways. They’re not ambiguous because the poet is ostentatiously vague…just a mysterious moment captured in time. Thanks!


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