River Music
February 26, 2010
In a post earlier this week, I included Charlotte Zolotow’s poem “River Winding,” the title poem from her 1970 children’s collection. I enjoyed reading her poems these past few days, so for Poetry Friday, I thought I’d post another from the collection:
NO ONE WOULD BELIEVE
No one would believe
unless they saw too
as the train passed him
(but it’s true)
facing the river
alone in the wind
an old old man
playing violin.
—From River Winding, by Charlotte Zolotow, originally published in 1970 by Abelard-Schuman; 2nd edition, the one I’m reading, published in 1978, by Crowell; illustrations by Kazue Mizumura)
My thoughts immediately went to those moments on trains when you catch glimpses from the window, snapshots, as the train zips past. Joy, sadness, loneliness—you fill in the picture based on a fleeting impression of what you see. Was what you witnessed actually there? What a great image offered by the poem, an old man playing the violin before the river. Personification (a wizened tree), or something odd and wonderful, a man at the river playing the violin? Playing to the river, a celebration of life? Or mourning its passing? What’s your impression?
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February 26, 2010 at 4:53 pm
I got the impression that the train is moving faster in life (just as young people move faster than the elderly).
The old, old man had come to a point in his life where standing can be a chore, but he continues to play (violin) in life. So he continues to contribute to life with his music.
Thanks for sharing.
Laura Evans
February 26, 2010 at 5:22 pm
I get that from the sounds of the poem, too. There’s a lift in that final line, “playing violin,” in contrast to “old, old” and “alone.”
Thanks, Laura.
February 26, 2010 at 6:12 pm
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February 26, 2010 at 6:16 pm
Hi Martha!
I love that title and the first line. Thanks for sharing this “snapshot.” I will look for River Winding.
February 27, 2010 at 4:44 pm
Hi Sheri. Glad you stopped by! Thanks.
February 27, 2010 at 1:02 pm
This poem makes me long for a train ride!
February 27, 2010 at 4:44 pm
I am so in the mood to travel, too! Thanks!
February 27, 2010 at 9:15 pm
I thought since you enjoy poetry that I’d invite you to contribute your list of favorite poems to my survey. Read more about it here: http://www.semicolonblog.com/?p=9520
March 4, 2010 at 1:40 pm
Thanks for sharing word of your “favorite poems” survey. You have me thinking about them!
March 3, 2010 at 10:03 pm
I love enigmatic poems like this, that are so simple in their imagery, but can be interpreted different ways. They’re not ambiguous because the poet is ostentatiously vague…just a mysterious moment captured in time. Thanks!
March 4, 2010 at 1:41 pm
“mysterious moment captured in time” says it well. Thanks, Laura.